ANC CONNECTOR

Her life is like mine because she has a journal that she keeps. Also her brother gets hurt and so does mine. And she is also very shy and she has no idea what a journal is in the beginning. Also she has a very messy house and so do I.And all her brothers and sisters play and so do all of my brothers and sisters. And it’s like the book Tangerine because Tangerine had all the dates like a journal and Absolutely Normal Chaos.

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One Response to “ANC CONNECTOR”

  1.   Ms. Fink Says:
    December 2nd, 2006 at 9:54 am

    You chose ideas from the book that are important, but you don’t fully support your connections.I would have liked to hear more about your journal and how your brother got hurt so that the connection is more clear. Each connection could have been a separate paragraph with details and examples to support the connection. Also - you never mention Mary Lou’s name or who she is.

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